WEEPING WILLOW (圖)

WEEPING WILLOW As if wind could hear it. As if heart could mend it and contain the soul. As if love and sorrow were separate. As if we all fall into the belated stars prophesied by a bird. As if a lie could prolong the length of a dream. As if a poem were a small cry of grief. As if love could be written. As if words could hear it. :feb/05

[影雲]

泣柳好！
你的修改更貼近原詩！！
開心可以給你啟發：)

[LTG]

垂柳/泣柳[?]


猶如風能聽見
猶如心能愈合，包容靈魂
猶如愛與悲哀可以分離
猶如我們墜入鳥兒預言的遲來之星
猶如謊言可以將夢延長
猶如詩是傷痛微弱的呐喊
猶如愛可被書寫
猶如文字可以聽見

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給我啟發!

感謝:)

[影雲]

哭泣的柳

猶如風能聽到
猶如心能愈合，包容靈魂
猶如愛與悲哀可以分離
猶如我們墜入鳥兒預言遲來的星
猶如謊言可以延緩夢
猶如詩是傷痛微弱的呐喊
猶如愛可以寫下來
猶如文字可以聽到