My Daisy (圖)

《My Daisy》 Going back to the days of early summer when you rose your head in the field to a stranger his hands shaking to touch you telling you how far he had traveled to find you Your fragrance has nothing to do with my dream Your sweetness is all I have now, even when the roads have abandoned me :1/28/05 [art: warhol]

[Yosemite]

Nice to talk with you and YY.

Have a good weekend.

[LTG]

ysmd,

no, no, no, i never laugh at friends who write poetry.... please don't misunderstand me....so, i didn't laugh at you!!!

when i used "hahaha....", it's because those words you used are like joking...

so, no worries!

[Yosemite]

I am simling. :D :)))
And I don't think our opinions are different from the beginning when I said “自作多情”.... :D :)))

[LTG]

"And I thought that way was free.... free my mind.... to think what I want to think....."

yes, i agree... i think you have a really good taste in arts....

[Yosemite]

For hahaha....

What do you mean?

I am thinking、 “自作多情”、“想入非非”freely to pictures and poetry. I thought they freed me, and I love them...

[影雲]

Yosemite, this has nothing do with Laughing - - - just different opinions - - - more like discussing:)

relax

[LTG]

詩人卻笑我???????

what do you mean?

[Yosemite]

And I thought that way was free.... free my mind.... to think what I want to think.....

[Yosemite]

You are quite right. I am one of them who don't understand arts, so when I face arts, especially a picture I like, easy to “自作多情”,"想入非非"......
畫家不笑我，詩人卻笑我。但笑無妨。

[LTG]

"按照通常的說法，對於詩人的詩，或是畫家的畫，讀者或看畫的人一般都是在“自作多情”。
不知道這是不是審美的道理。"hahaha....

“自作多情”??? "通常"???? "審美的道理"??????

such concepts are for people who don't understand arts.... they can live without arts, for example, like working themselves to the end of life like one of the cogs in a huge machine....

art, i think, should first free people.... when one's mind is free, one can feel the joy of what's beautiful and what's "dutiful" ...

the business of poetry has always been a "lonely business" :)

[Yosemite]

按照通常的說法，對於詩人的詩，或是畫家的畫，讀者或看畫的人一般都是在“自作多情”。
不知道這是不是審美的道理。

[LTG]

my own inspiration for this poem was simpler ... i.e. love that sustains us ... even though we take the "roads" day in and day out...

thank you all!

have a great weekend!

[影雲]

野菊花

總以為
花開是偶然
草叢與夜空
遁隱著
渴望瞬間的
火影

你來時
花季已淡
我在等待
明日的飄落

你的腳步
解開花心的秘密
你的氣息
滋潤等待的漫長

在你的掌心
我重返
花開的欣喜，即便
凋落是必然
我將在這田野間
再次綻放

[優勝美地]

向兩位詩人學習！謝謝 LTG 在寒冷的冬季將我們帶回初夏時節的田野。

喜歡影雲《野菊花》的解讀和翻譯！

我讀這首詩仿佛見到一個追夢的人，尋尋覓覓，在田野看到野菊花後才了然所悟：

《我的野菊花》

回返
初夏時節
你在田野
朝陌生人
抬起頭
他顫動的雙手
觸摸著你
喃喃敘說
他跋涉了多麽遙遠
才找到你

你的芳香
並不是我的夢想
但你的甜美
是我現在的所有
即使道路
都將我離棄

（我讀這首詩好像在自述，所以我的翻譯較直白，破壞了原詩留給人的想象空間。）

[LTG]

靈感來自大自然：）

謝謝你的共鳴！！

[影雲]

謝謝：)
哇，你好多靈感，讓我佩服的五體投地！！！
好清新！！:)

[LTG]

哇，你好快！！！

也好流暢！！！

[影雲]

野菊花

回溯
初夏時：
田地間
你朝陌生人
微微抬頭
他的手
顫抖著撫摸你
喃喃述說
為你
他跋涉了多久

你的芬芳
與我的夢無關
你的甜蜜
是我現在的所有，即使
所有的路遺棄了我


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