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(2005-07-15 21:17:28)
塘沽兄您好，
大作讀罷，受益匪淺啊！很多都說到小弟心坎裏去了。小弟以為，大作在“體裁”和“語言”兩方麵進行了新舊的論述。似乎更注重在“語言”上。古板兄貼的文章小弟喜歡，出於個人對舊體詩詞這一體裁的偏好。兄的文章則在“用語”上說出了小弟的心裏話。其實小弟也一直在和多位高人討論這個問題。您前麵和一位朋友談英文詩中詩人自己“造詞”時就想向[閱讀全文]
(2005-07-15 20:20:21)
Untitled . ... .... ..... ....... attheoddhour ofanunidenticalday ofthistwothousandoddyear iwakefromwhattheycallreality &stepintotheotherworld thattastesmorereal thanoctoberrain &foronceinmylife Iamhappilywet inadecent rain.... ...... .... .. . ::z.z.summer'05 foto:j.hendrix'ssite [閱讀全文]
(2005-07-14 12:42:46)
Waves underthetuesdaysun iholdmyhand inmidday'slonging watchinglight travelthru blood tinylines becomewaveswashing thrunoon'sheart thesamewaves onyourlips inyourvoice deepwhirlling wavesinyour eyesarerising thrumy blood whatisit keepingmeup thewholenight ?? theuniverse inmypalm keepsexpanding waveskeep rollingrising towardstheplace whereyouleft yourson...[閱讀全文]
(2005-07-12 18:07:30)
ABlue-domer'sPrayer Let'sbegin fromthebegin ninglet'sbe ginfromthe beginning letusbe fromthebe ginning letusbe bylettingus beginbeing thebeginninglet thebeginningbegin frombeingfromus thebeginning beginthebeginning beginfrom usletthe beginning beletthe beingbegin fromus letus beus let us b e . . . ::z.z.'04 [閱讀全文]
(2005-07-11 19:46:09)
與樓下朋友的討論可能有寫‘偏差’，所以，另開一爐，歡迎添柴！
在秋菱設下的“羅網”裏，大家提到“美”。。。
我們都對“美”感興趣，向往美好。但，什麽是“美”？？
美，沒有一個固定的標準。
由於新詩不是中學生寫作文，不需要固定的格式和篇幅的製約，所以，再
談到新詩的“技術問題”時，就很容易“百家爭鳴”了。
我指的新詩不僅僅限於我[閱讀全文]
(2005-07-10 11:08:42)
秋菱／胖子／影雲／野調等“詩畫”新朋老友， 秋菱的貼子又勾出一番感觸。 秋菱的新詩略帶古氣，但“新聲／心聲”溢與紙麵。您就別“牽須”了！：） 我對學府／學腐式的詩學研究從不“感冒”，我對新詩的感覺完全來自實踐，無門 無派，如巨蟹走路，頂八麵來風，常常“聲東擊西”，隨情致放浪，不拘形骸。侃 新詩多是心血來潮。 新詩不是“遺產”，如[閱讀全文]
(2005-07-08 20:45:10)
"Happiness" Wheredoesitcomefrom? Whatisthereasonforthisfeelingofhappiness? Doesitarisefrommygoodlongsleep whichhasdonemesomuchgood? OrfromthewordOmwhichIpronounced? OrbecauseIhaverunaway,because myflightisaccomplished,because Iamatlastfreeagainandstand likeachildbeneaththesky? Ah,howgoodthisflighthasbeen,thisliberation! ::exerptsfrom"Siddhartha"byHermannHesse [On...[閱讀全文]
(2005-07-07 20:53:13)
"LoveisforLosers"
waswhatisaw
onateenageboy'steeshirt--
hewasanartless,boredyoungteen
whocarriedaheavy
statement
inhisface
onhischest
inhiseyes
onhisshoulders
inhisheart
...
what'sfor"winners"then?
somanyyoungpeople
alreadyspent,bent
walkingaroundcarrying
astatement
likearustedsun
likealoadedgun
...
someonewashurt
deepinside
someoneisgoingto
hurtsomeone
tonight
......[閱讀全文]
(2005-07-07 11:45:10)
《夜的南方》 夜的南方 是一汪藍藍的湖水 清澈見底的 是夢的 回廊 . . . 她走累了 他停住腳步 撥回時鍾 將她輕輕依偎懷中 吻去她的疲憊 和夜的暗涼-- 信任 是抵禦寒冷 最好的 秘方 . . . 她的眼底 是藍藍的湖水一汪 夜清澈 深不見底 她說: 夢的南方 是故鄉 ::作舟,05年夏[閱讀全文]
(2005-07-06 16:40:07)
PlantingStones Iamguiltyofuprootingyou fromthebottomofforest atwater'sedge whereIgrewenamored withtime'sshape& therawsmoothness ofsoul'sendurance forhours Iimmersedmyselfwithin asinglebody ofthetime-worn,water-kissed stone,sobeautifullydarkened bytheeternalsong inlowlight myexcuse wastheloveIfeltforyou andtheflowinglight overyourentirebeing Icouldnotpart andIknew...[閱讀全文]
