漢譯英詩：因吾未能為死神留步

Because I could not stop for Death By Emily Dickinson    Because I could not stop for Death – He kindly stopped for me – The Carriage held but just Ourselves – And Immortality.   We slowly drove – He knew no haste And I had put away My labor and my leisure too, For His Civility –   We passed the School, where Children strove At Recess – in the Ring – We passed the Fields of Gazing Grain – We passed the Setting Sun –   Or rather – He passed Us – The Dews drew quivering and Chill – For only Gossamer, my Gown – My Tippet – only Tulle –   We paused before a House that seemed A Swelling of the Ground – The Roof was scarcely visible – The Cornice – in the Ground –   Since then – 'tis Centuries – and yet Feels shorter than the Day I first surmised the Horses' Heads Were toward Eternity –

因吾未能為死神留步 作者：愛米麗·迪肯森   因吾未能為死神留步 死神卻善意為吾駐足 馬車隻容納死神與吾 另外還有那天保九如   道路上我們緩轡徐行 死神知曉著急也沒用 為了死神的禮貌謙恭 我也將勞作休閑暫停   我們路過了學校園庭 課間孩童在操場歡騰 我們路過了稻糧田野 夕陽落日從身旁流經   或許死神從身旁掠過 露珠兒令吾顫抖寒冷 長袍隻不過遊絲軟係 披肩隻不過薄紗一層   我們駐足在一座房前 房屋好像從地麵臃出 幾乎看不見房屋頂部 地麵以下掩埋著屋簷   從那時算已過數百年 感覺卻比一晝夜還短 當初我猜想馬首是瞻 朝一個方向直至永遠

 

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• 好譯！早安書香 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 04:53:51

• 鄰兄早安。：） -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 05:18:07

• 憂憂早安 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 05:19:58

• 多謝鄰兄支持！ -美國王過人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 09:07:03

• 讚，可以請求加個白話文版本嗎？：） -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 04:57:15

• 英雄所見略同 :-) -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 04:58:59

• 突然發現＂女中豪傑＂這種形容，政治不正確，有貶低之意 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 05:00:43

• LOL -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 06:11:19

• 本來想說憂憂是女中豪傑:-) -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 06:40:06

• 多謝無憂支持！ -美國王過人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 09:07:31

• emily是自由體的詩，王兄文采非凡，翻譯成自由詩會不會更加盡興？ -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 04:58:25

• +1：） -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 05:23:36

• 鄰兄過獎，要把這首詩翻譯成漢語版自由體難度非常高。 -美國王過人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 09:12:32

• 好譯，讚！ -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 13:19:00

• 多謝支持！ -美國王過人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 16:24:53

• 感覺你翻譯得很好。 -youdecide- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 18:13:42