修改如下，請指正

Song for Geese

文/ 駱賓王
譯/ Yimusanfendi

Geese, geese, geese,
Crane the necks to the sky they sing,
White feathers on green water float
Red palms in clear waves paddling.

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• 不用改。越改越問題多。比如，palms vs feet. -墨瑞- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2017 postreply 16:43:48

• 嗯，墨師高見。水平有限，譯英文總覺得不夠給力～～～ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2017 postreply 08:06:57