響應威武兄與沅湘兄號召，也譯一下楓橋夜泊

楓橋夜泊

張繼

月落烏啼霜滿天
江楓漁火對愁眠
姑蘇城外寒山寺
夜半鍾聲到客船

Mooring by Maple Bridge at Night 

By Zhang Ji

The moon is sinking, a crow is crying and frost all over the sky,
Sleeping against deep sorrow, riverside maples and fishermen's light.
Outside the city of Gusu, the temple of Cold Mountain,
Spreading the bell's sound to the passenger boat at the midnight.

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• 久不來，寒班離任劍兄上崗；謝寒班並賀劍兄 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 09:00:28

• The moon is sinking。。。。。不要用falling。 -墨瑞- ♀ (173 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 09:29:39

• 嗯。。。 墨師明察。。Falling 似乎太快且與水無關。。。。改了。謝謝！ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 09:45:52

• passenger ship/boat，不要用guest boat。 -墨瑞- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 12:30:33

• 嗯，用guest 隨便了點。 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (39 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 20:37:59

• 很流暢，喜歡！ -阿留- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 11:24:47

• 讚好譯！ -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 13:08:01

• 讚一個！拋磚能引來一畝兄好玉，值得！ -wuwei09- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 15:54:04

• 謝威武兄謬讚！你譯文挺好的 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 22:36:25

• like fishermen's light. why only one crow, to indicate the lonel -檻外長江- ♂ (270 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 16:13:05

• 謝謝。 Since we do not know it is one or multiple crows, one will b -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (342 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 20:36:42

• understand!. i always think that he did no see the frost (on ear -檻外長江- ♂ (279 bytes) () 09/27/2016 postreply 18:19:18

• 讚一個！ -相看不厭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 21:43:09

• 謝厭兄！問候！ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/26/2016 postreply 22:37:14