李白 月下獨酌 英譯

"Drinking Alone under the Moon," 

by Li Bai

花間一壺酒，獨酌無相親。
舉杯邀明月，對影成三人。
月既不解飲，影徒隨我身。 
暫伴月將影，行樂須及春。
我歌月徘徊，我舞影零亂。 
醒時同交歡，醉後各分散。
永結無情遊，相期邈雲漢。

Among the flowers a jar of wine to be,
Drinking by myself and no one close to me. 
I raise up my cup to invite the bright moon,
Facing my shadow and we have made three.
Yet the moon does not understand drinking,

And my shadow follows my body  in vain.

But temporarily I make moon and shadow my companions,
Must enjoy the pleasures till next spring.
I sing and the moon is wandering around,

I dance and my shadow scatters on the ground
When I'm awake together we make pleasures,

After getting drunk, we depart no more to be found.
Making a forever oath to a journey of not a broken heart,

Expecting to see each other in the Milky Way apart.

譯於 7/25/2016

所有跟帖： 

• 不錯。moon 後 用 is 和does not。或可試試abba cddc effe gg的14行格式。 -小貝殼weed- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 22:44:25

• 謝謝貝妹妹指正。改了。英文押韻我覺得好難，要費許多功夫。 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 00:34:04

• 好 -相看不厭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 00:41:52

• 欣賞好譯，押韻更有味道，問好！ -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 03:26:29

• 好棒！欣賞學習了！ -潛東籬- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 04:17:56

• no more to be found…隻是為了押韻麽？ -泥鰍兒- ♀ (41 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 04:41:51

• 是的。有點矛盾和發揮..... -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 07:04:33

• 謝各位鼓勵！ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 07:39:24

• 讚一畝兄好譯！ -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 12:49:21