英譯【七律 · 觀廬山瀑布】 by 相看不厭 (交厭兄作業）

【七律 · 觀廬山瀑布】

相看不厭
 
香爐峰上大羅仙，一竹長竿捅破天。
倒海連江千丈雨，遮雲蔽日萬重煙。
女媧煉石年年補，愚叟移山月月填。
驚得龍王歸入海，卻留三尺掛天泉。

Watching Mount Lu

Big Luo fairy up on the Censer peak of Mount Lu,
Broke the heaven with a pole of long bamboo.
Pouring sea into river with three thousand meters of rain,
Ten thousand layers of mists have hidden both cloud and sun from view.
Year by year Nuwa melted down stones to patch up the heaven,
Month by month the old fool man fill the river by moving the mountain ,
The dragon King was frightened to flee to the sea,
But left three feet to hang the heavenly spring.

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• 看兄，我鬥膽現醜一譯啊。沒譯出味道，見諒 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2016 postreply 23:09:49

• 俺珍藏了，再次叩謝，一兄周末魚快。 -相看不厭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2016 postreply 23:19:11

• 一兄太有才，太厲害，太棒了，俺不知說啥好了，俺本隻是開個玩笑的，叩謝，叩謝，再叩謝。 -相看不厭- ♂ (485 bytes) () 07/16/2016 postreply 23:13:21

• 看兄妙讚。剛試中譯英，你這是我試著的第三首。很粗糙。謝兄美言。 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2016 postreply 23:54:05

• 一兄大才，無所不能，英文詩也韻味十足，該開班了，俺替您收fee ^_^ -相看不厭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2016 postreply 00:02:41

• Impressed! -泥鰍兒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2016 postreply 05:26:40

• 一畝兄好譯，欣賞，周末愉快！ -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2016 postreply 08:06:52

• 欣賞學習，Yi兄高才！ -潛東籬- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2016 postreply 09:13:07

• 不懂英文，跟著讚。 -秦照- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2016 postreply 11:51:02

• 同賞。 中詩英譯確實難。表現力和空間不一樣。厲害！ -沙迦緬度- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2016 postreply 12:07:37

• 學習 欣賞 讚 -葉虻- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2016 postreply 19:12:34