翻譯Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost

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Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening   (by Robert Frost)
下雪的黃昏林間停駐中譯曼無 (ling1984)

Whose woods these are I think I know.    我恍若知曉這是誰的樹林.
His house is in the village though;     主人家就在邊上村莊;
He will not see me stopping here,   他不會看見我在此停駐流連,
To watch his woods fill up with snow.   盈樹的積雪引我凝望。

My little horse must think it queer,    我的小馬駒必以為怪,
To stop without a farmhouse near.   四望杳無農家,
Between the woods and frozen lake   又逢此年最晦暗的傍晚
The darkest evening of the year.      我卻在寒林凍湖間停駐不前。

He gives his harness bells a shake,    它搖響了鈴串,
To ask if there is some mistake.   似問有否差錯出現.
The only other sound's the sweep,   林中唯聞清風輕撫雪片,
Of easy wind and downy flake.       再無其它聲音可辨。

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,   樹林何其嫵媚引人入勝，神秘幽深一如永恒
But I have promises to keep,     然而我有諾在先必須兌現豈可食言,
And miles to go before I sleep,   路漫漫其修遠我將上下求索方能安眠,
And miles to go before I sleep.   路漫漫其修遠  我將上下求索方能安眠。

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Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening   (by Robert Frost)
下雪的黃昏林間暫停中譯曼無 (ling1984)

Whose woods these are I think I know.    我想我知道這些是誰的樹林.
His house is in the village though;     縱使林主的家就在這兒的村莊;
He will not see me stopping here,   他卻不會看見我在此暫停,
To watch his woods fill up with snow.   積雪盈樹的美景引我流連觀望。

My little horse must think it queer,    我的小馬必定覺得奇怪,
To stop without a farmhouse near.   四望看不到任何農家,
Between the woods and frozen lake   又是一年中最暗的黃昏天
The darkest evening of the year.      我卻在寒林和冰湖之間停下。

He gives his harness bells a shake,    它搖晃了身上的鈴串,
To ask if there is some mistake.   好似問我是否有什麽差錯出現.
The only other sound's the sweep,   隻有陣陣清風細撫雪片,
Of easy wind and downy flake.   除此之外再沒有其它聲音可聽見。

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,   這樹林可愛，陰暗又幽深，
But I have promises to keep,    然而我有諾言必須要兌現,
And miles to go before I sleep,   還要趕好幾哩路才能安眠,
And miles to go before I sleep.   還要趕好幾哩路才能安眠。

五絕連續四首版    特別感謝老哈哈詩友的原玉絕對是及時雨

似曉入誰林
村居便可尋
其人無覺擾
賞景我歡心

瘦馬好奇頻
難猜駐足因
凍湖寒木處
偏遇暗沈淪

忽聞鈴作響
若問謬何如
幽雪清風撫
餘音杳杳書

秀林情致遠
有諾必誠虔
夙夜兼程趕
何時適可眠

原玉   by 老哈哈

清夜誰家林，
鄉親堪比鄰；
不期過路人，
賞鬆雪夜吟。