看到Ling1984的譯詩，很高興。一首唐詩，一段美詩，征中譯英，英譯中

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馬作人語 （國人偉大，一千多年無人懷疑唐朝馬用漢語作詩）

蘆荻花，
此花開後
路無家。 （《全唐詩》卷867）


Directive   (by Robert Lee Frost, 1874-1963)  （此首較難譯，隻選第一段貼出----仔細看看，其實隻是一句。你想分幾句譯？分析一下說話人的口氣：老農？遊客？曆史學家？社會批評家？分析語言：俚語？口語？教育良好的口語？書麵語？正式語？古雅語？）

Back out of this now too much for us,
Back in a time made simple by the loss
Of detail, burned, dissolved, and broken off
Like graveyard marble sculture in the weather,
There is a house that is no more a house
Upon a farm that is no more a farm
And in a town that is no more a town.


Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening   (by Robert  Frost)  (這首稍易，試譯第一、四兩段；如有興趣，可全譯）

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

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