新譯《聖經·詩篇》 （第一篇）

新譯《聖經·詩篇》　（第一篇）

（以色列所羅門王的父親大衛王的著名讚美詩）

受神祝福之人不上壞人當！

不因循罪路，也不入荒唐嘲諷之座場；

卻喜愛耶和華的律法，默默地晝思夜想。

此人酷似豐登玉樹，被栽種溪旁。

她枝繁葉茂、定時結果、從不延宕；

他凡事騰達，建功盡顯輝煌！

惡人卻恰恰相反——散若粃糠、隨風散蕩。

他們麵對審判將無法站立，在正義的會眾中分外恐慌！

耶和華能識別義人的路啊，那惡者必將在其途中滅亡！

附上NIV英文譯本：和合本－新國際新版和新世界譯本等不同版本聖經英語譯文：Psalm 1 New International Version (NIV)BOOK IPsalms 1 1 Blessed is the one who does not walk in step with the wicked or stand in the way that sinners take or sit in the company of mockers, 2 but whose delight is in the law of the LORD, and who meditates on his law day and night. 3 That person is like a tree planted by streams of water, which yields its fruit in season and whose leaf does not wither— whatever they do prospers. 4 Not so the wicked! They are like chaff that the wind blows away. 5 Therefore the wicked will not stand in the judgment, nor sinners in the assembly of the righteous. 6 For the LORD watches over the way of the righteous, but the way of the wicked leads to destruction. BOOK I Psalm 11:1Blessed is the man who doesn’t walk in the counsel of the wicked,nor standin the way of sinners, nor sitin the seat of scoffers; 1:2but his delight is in Yahweh’slaw. On hislaw he meditates day and night. 1:3He will be like a tree planted by the streams of water, thatbrings forth its fruit in its season, whoseleaf also does not wither. Whateverhe does shall prosper. 1:4The wicked are not so, but arelike the chaff which the wind drives away. 1:5Therefore the wicked shall not stand in the judgment, norsinners in the congregation of the righteous. 1:6For Yahweh knows the way of the righteous, but theway of the wicked shall perish.

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• 崔俠，難得一韻到底，很有聖詩品味。希望看到詩句有標號和英文對應。英文字太小不好讀。 -淘金客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/27/2013 postreply 19:16:36

• 回複：回複：謝垂賞與幫助。詩歌的翻譯應保持詩歌的韻味，押韻是必須的。你說的好，可誦可唱起碼要求。英文字體可以放大一號。 -崔澍泉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/27/2013 postreply 21:32:47

• 啊，這譯出來的聖詩還要唱？！那就要更仔細了。 -淘金客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/27/2013 postreply 22:21:22

• 回複：押韻的詩歌念唱起來才有韻味好聽，大白話唱起來就像哭喪調，老婦女們都會。聖詩中常提到唱並要配上管弦絲竹。 -崔澍泉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/28/2013 postreply 12:06:45