To Soul

You are the only one
I am able to search
before and after
Young or old
transient or forever
the happiness or sorrow of life
All in all
nothing out of nothing
Thanks for the wisdom
that keeps human out of physics
that could destroy ourselves
We need your humanity side of tenderness
to prevail,  to indulge, to immerse
to balance
away from games, away from destruction, away from killings
Not necessarily need any answer
just the feel that could carry us in river of times
through lives that you are comfortable with
to stay in peace
even on other planets filled with your relatives

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• 新年拜碼頭第一篇翻譯，獻給核班。新年與周末愉快！ 致靈魂 翻譯篇~~~ -ling1984- ♀ (520 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 11:40:35

• ：），靈的翻譯不錯~：） -*紅袖添亂*- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 14:27:02

• 姐姐翻譯太拘謹死板，還是狗哥的有創意~~哈哈~~ -ling1984- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 15:02:03

• 敬佩ling姐的中文造詣和才氣！也謝謝版主的原創！ -娘們兒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 14:32:34

• MM過獎了， 核班為詩壇任勞任怨，姐姐要力頂他的作品一下。 -ling1984- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 15:04:08

• 介個也能押韻，太靈了；謝謝 -nuts000- ♀ (177 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 15:32:17

• 這句比較難押韻，你連續用了好幾個away from，搔破頭隻能這樣翻譯才押韻。 -ling1984- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 16:24:08

• 意思要緊，沒必要通押。。 -nuts000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 19:53:52

• 好吧！那容易，稍作修改。用來征服，放縱，沉浸，平衡， 遠離遊戲，遠離毀滅，遠離殺戮血腥 -ling1984- ♀ (620 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 20:54:00

• 這是自譯版，但最後一段不夠簡潔，沒有英文表達的幽默：） -nuts000- ♀ (567 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 21:25:11

• 這自譯版最好，下回寫英文詩要附上自譯本， 核班帶頭作表率。 哈哈~~ -ling1984- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 21:58:34

• :) ））） 狗哥說~~ -*紅袖添亂*- ♀ (1410 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 14:25:29

• 噗哧笑了，狗哥威武~~~ 袖袖周末愉快！ -ling1984- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 15:00:51

• 狗哥翻得還行：））） -nuts000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 15:30:29

• :) ）））~~ -yuwwa- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 16:50:01

• 都讚讚！：） -阿童木牧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/05/2013 postreply 16:21:13