回複:托福口語試題1.不 練習求助。

回答: 托福口語試題1.不 練習求助。blueswan2011-05-06 08:33:21

Well, my all-time favorite book is Ever After written by Nancy Woods, an English writer. 

And there are many reasons why I like it. 

The most important reason is that this book tells you(YOU最好用ME,US, 和其它代詞一致; 或幹脆去掉)an exciting adventure story, where people travel to far away places and meet very different cultures. I was taken into another world and forgot about the pressure and stress in real life whenever I read it(最好用一般時態. 如果特指過去某一時間點,最好加上表示過去的副詞.) 

What's more, it brought(最好用一般時態或完成時) me many topics to talk with my friends. I can chat with my friends on and on about the book and its characters; and any topic, clever or silly, related to the book can always become a point of lengthy discussions. Staying with friends makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

That's why I like this book.

這是關於一個地方的練習,還是請大家看看,這個地方可以是任何地方可以套用的。謝謝!

Talking about my favorite place, undoubtedly, it’s my hometown, Qingdao.

I can’t help loving the city because of its beauty and the special cultural atmosphere.

My hometown is famous for its charming ocean view. I mean the sky there is so blue and the beach is always full of sunshine. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself(整個段落代詞最好統一,原因與上同) on the beach, when the sun is setting down, when the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.

Another thing about Qingdao which makes it such an attracting city is about the architecture of the European style there. Walking in the famous Central Street in the middle of this city makes you wonder whether you are in China or in Germany(代詞統一,同上).

Of course I like Qingdao also because there are many great restaurants. They offer the best seafood in the world like lobsters and tuna fishes(FISH的複數是FISH, FISHES一般用於表示不同種類魚).

The most important, the memories and joy I experienced when I was there will always have a special place in my heart.

It’ll take me forever to talk about the reasons for loving the city. One thing is for sure, I will always love my hometown, the amazing city, Qingda.

水平有限,修改前請和高手核實!

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