酒後的幾個半句

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over bump, over hump
through corn, through thorn
over ridge, over bridge,
through wind, through wave
i go, i go, i go
from west to midwest
from midwest to east
i go, i go, i go
with burns, with blisters
through fire, through freeze
o, rain, whip me
to make me swift
o, snow, freeze me
to tame the flame

i long for the hour
of eternity
when eyes meet:
love in hers
lust in mine
and vice versa
in this hour
words are extra
so are scarves, sleeves
and slacks
but movements speak
leopards leap
tigers tumble
observing the merge

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• 節奏感真強，讀起來真美，喝醉啦真好。 -cicila- ♀ 給 cicila 發送悄悄話 cicila 的博客首頁 (110 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 07:50:19

• sharp ear and eye. indeed, the first stanza was done while i was -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (63 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:34:45

• the first stanza was done while i was drinking -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:56:04

• to be more exact, (you should say) -cicila- ♀ 給 cicila 發送悄悄話 cicila 的博客首頁 (386 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:23:35

• haha yes I drank at least 80 proof of vodka:) -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (110 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:00:06

• not just that. -cicila- ♀ 給 cicila 發送悄悄話 cicila 的博客首頁 (108 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 19:03:19

• I see:) I didn't know that 二鍋頭 really made it:) -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (39 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 19:58:46

• seems u went to party last night, a friendly reminder: -fearcpatest- ♀ 給 fearcpatest 發送悄悄話 fearcpatest 的博客首頁 (317 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 12:15:34

• thank you!!! i did not know much of etiquette in this regard -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (82 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:38:44

• LOL. Then did you get gifts from your enemies -cicila- ♀ 給 cicila 發送悄悄話 cicila 的博客首頁 (349 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:49:47

• very true. Enimies are the real judges (friends only flatter). -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (30 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:08:43

• Lenin? -cicila- ♀ 給 cicila 發送悄悄話 cicila 的博客首頁 (99 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:54:25

• no gift from enimies. but they have made me braver:) -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:25:38

• 酒後賦詩，想必真切。 -斕婷- ♀ 給 斕婷 發送悄悄話 斕婷 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 14:49:15

• true, very true except it is hard to decipher -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (155 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:44:35

• lol...Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. -斕婷- ♀ 給 斕婷 發送悄悄話 斕婷 的博客首頁 (72 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:07:37

• Thank you. Ben was great. He was the man of wine and wit:) -falsetruth- ♀ 給 falsetruth 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:03:58

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