請批改我的”鸚鵡學舌作業“

真誠地希望您指出我需要改進的地方， 謝謝！     

Here are the lines.

From the dentist

Lesson One
Schools and Education
Basic patterns
1.    What college should I attend in the fall?
2.    I’m majoring in history.  
3.    Can you tell me where is the dormitory?
4.    I’m taking extra classes this semester.
5.    Are you having problems with chemistry?
6.    I’m not worried about this test.
7.    The prices of textbooks have gone up.
8.    Our class has a meeting after lunch.
9.    The new professor is very strict.
10.    Do you want to study together for the exam?

所有跟帖： 

• 模仿得很好啊 -全國牙防組- ♂ (309 bytes) () 11/13/2010 postreply 15:20:32

• 謝謝牙醫的金耳朵，以後一定注意這些問題 -AspenL- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/13/2010 postreply 15:41:18

• 朗讀原文：鸚鵡學舌作業 來源: 全國牙防組 -紫君- ♀ (1736 bytes) () 11/13/2010 postreply 19:45:43

• 回複：朗讀原文：鸚鵡學舌作業 來源: 全國牙防組 -AspenL- ♂ (76 bytes) () 11/13/2010 postreply 20:04:50

• 歡迎新同學！ :) -千與.千尋- ♀ (342 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 08:29:35

• 哎呀！ 簡直對極了。我就是搞不定， “l" 和 "r", 還有 “l" 和"n” 。 謝謝你號的脈。 -AspenL- ♂ (109 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 10:07:51

• AspenL's聲音太小拉. -亦冬- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:32:06

• 就這音量，已經是壯著膽子學舌的成就了。下次改進。一定。 -AspenL- ♂ (61 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:41:13

• your voice sounds like my american neighbor! very good -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (18 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 16:30:39

• 謝謝鼓勵。 在這裏潛水很長時間了，很熟悉你的論壇號。好象老外經常用term 代替... -AspenL- ♂ (139 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 18:37:23