Overall, it is very good, only 2 grammar mistakes.~

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It seemed that these resolutions were made to be violated rather than be kept...
>>It seemed that these resolutions were made to be violated rather than TO be kept...

remind myself a few things
>>remind myself OF a few things...

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• Not sure, I changed that way for parallelism. -lilac09- ♀ 給 lilac09 發送悄悄話 lilac09 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/12/2010 postreply 08:39:19

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