那一夜

that night, i saw bright stars
that later became so misty

that night, i climbed two mountains
and kissed their standing peaks

that night, i kneeled down
and gently touched a soft plain

that night, i explored a hidden bush
and found a petaled well

that night, i drank oozed water
when the well started to tremble

that night, i heard cries low and loud
when a furrow was plowed and seeded

that was a sleepless night
that was an unforgettable night

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• 這真是個美麗的sleepless night啊.那第二天是不是sleepy day呢？:) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 09:10:28

• haha you are right:) -不會起名- ♂ (44 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 11:42:25

• 不名，你這詩不好接。我來試著和你的詩.（費了些時間） -fizzer- ♀ (589 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 11:38:45

• Thank you for the beautiful poem. -不會起名- ♂ (142 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 12:11:56

• 我寫＂blue still is the sky＂ 這句是inspired by這首浪漫音樂＂藍色夜曲＂。 -fizzer- ♀ (396 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 13:22:32

• very romantic, very pleasing, very tender -不會起名- ♂ (88 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 13:45:25

• Great work! -star-night- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 15:15:54

• 我是有感而發。謝大師賞讀。 -不會起名- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 19:56:14