給我的軍師。我來拜山學藝。

i missed the "not" when i wrote
i missed the site when i drove
why can i not forget to
miss the Darling River day and night

you said," missing words is fine
people can still understand
missing site, that's all right
pay attention to the sign"

but my friend
why did you intend
to forget to tell me
when the yearning's going to end

所有跟帖： 

• 澳洲Darling River非常美，養育了Aboriginal people。 -fizzer- ♀ (130 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 09:39:42

• 謝謝你介紹澳洲的風土人情，長見識了。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 14:52:10

• 沒說明白。我是來美語世界拜山跟大家學藝，不是來拜軍師~~ -fizzer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 11:35:03

• 歡迎您來美語壇，大家一起學習，共同進步。 -紫君- ♀ (1365 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 14:57:26

• Many thanks. -fizzer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:18:39

• 有水平。看來你一直想友人。 -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 12:15:35

• 謝doitthen朋友。你的ID很有意義，讓我想起來 -fizzer- ♀ (156 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 13:27:07

• 寫的地道流暢的一首英詩，自然生動的對話。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:00:02

• 謝謝紫君鼓勵。那的確是我跟軍師的一段對話。 -fizzer- ♀ (135 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:17:42

• 英詩：Yearning 作者：fizzer -紫君- ♀ (3170 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:24:55

• 謝謝紫君。設計得太美了。那顆大水滴好似一滴大眼淚一樣。 -fizzer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:55:47

• 不知為何這首是令我流淚 -hahaman- ♀ (300 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 19:31:07

• 謝謝hahaman。寫得真好。 -fizzer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 21:09:36

• 你寫的不錯 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/30/2010 postreply 12:22:09

• is your friend in real life or over the internet? -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2010 postreply 06:54:44

• actually, that doesn't matter, do哥. what really matters is -fizzer- ♀ (83 bytes) () 07/01/2010 postreply 07:58:56

• 謝謝解釋。明白了。 -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2010 postreply 08:02:24