my beloved friend,

is the moon that leads me to your poetry world?
is the sun that guides me to your prose universe?
the hands of time pull me to your side
i'm growing, growing to a bigger bird

is the tiger who makes my sky broader?
is the bear who makes my soul vastier?
the scent of breeze directs me to the garden
what a wonderful world it is.

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• what's a wonderful piece, sweetie. The moon, the sun, the world -bearsback- ♂ (143 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 12:23:42

• 謝謝，少寫了４個＂it＂。看來我真的不喜歡做IT了。:) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 12:50:44

• you are sharp. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (87 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 12:55:23

• love lets me see far and wide -bearsback- ♂ (33 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 13:02:06

• i love the verbs -bearsback- ♂ (28 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 15:06:52

• 回複：i love the verbs -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (66 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:22:38

• sweetie -bearsback- ♂ (61 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:19:51