那個飯前十分鍾,裏拉也應景湊個小破詩一首~~

本帖於 2010-06-14 19:41:52 時間, 由版主 林貝卡 編輯

yellow, pink and green
orange, apple and papaya (木瓜)
man, woman and gay
the world is a plate of Jambalaya (什錦菜)

green and gay 壓頭韻 - alliteration
papaya and Jambalaya 壓尾韻

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squeaking bed poem? -deepwoods- 給 deepwoods 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 18:31:13

haha, 不錯, 又頭韻, 又尾韻 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (38 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 18:37:02

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