給第一排左數第一

I am the smallest candle
always standing before you
plain, pink, yes, pure, no
for I also have a scandle

I am the smallest candle
I love to wear a large sandle
no one pays attention to my face
but they love to watch my toes

I am the smallest candle
beauty is all too shallow
don't judge me for what you see
if you do, then you are too simple

I am the smallest candle
but I am not a smallest handle

ha

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• credit: the above post -bearsback- ♂ (2 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 13:10:49

• it's so beautiful and funny, bear. can i call it 商賴兒歌:) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (79 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 13:48:57

• haha, you are right, it is a 商賴兒歌 -bearsback- ♂ (8 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 14:20:18

• 回複：給第一排左數第一 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (256 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 14:16:18

• 回複：回複：給第一排左數第一 -bearsback- ♂ (51 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 14:22:20

• 我才發現，昨晚咱倆吃的一樣的大餐。deepwoods給咱倆的飯 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (86 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 16:09:06

• haha, nice observation. but -bearsback- ♂ (59 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 16:37:16

• but he aslo said he was nameless at this forum. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (22 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 16:39:25

• i know. -bearsback- ♂ (16 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 16:46:40

• 回複：haha, nice observation. but -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (50 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 16:46:50

• I think you two should share the same dishes.haha. -deepwoods- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 16:58:45

• 請你一起來吃。這麽好吃的大餐，我是忘不了您的，hehehe -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 19:09:25

• 你的英詩韻律真好。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 14:45:44

• 回複：給第一排左數第一 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (94 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 16:37:47

• 寶貝， 三十年前我的詞匯量是一萬五。 現在 -bearsback- ♂ (46 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 17:13:21

• nice one, thank you!could you teach me what the rhyme is and it -deepwoods- ♂ (57 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 17:05:43

• rhyme is not the most important, but rhythm is. -bearsback- ♂ (65 bytes) () 06/14/2010 postreply 17:50:47