也寫首詩，不知道自己寫的是什麽體，不過寫詩真的很好玩～

Daffodil (黃水仙，我最愛的一種花)



You say I'm always happy,
Or, I just look so?
When has the cloud shadowed?
I ask myself,
also why-so and how-so?

Am I like an angel?
how come I can feel the devil?!
"Don't think too much, silly girl!"
OK,
Advil, bedevil, and daffodil......

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• Very good !!! -star-night- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 12:33:53

• 我知道你厲害，幫我改改呢？ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 13:44:09

• It is perfect !!! -star-night- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 13:54:18

• 頂才女妹妹! -楚江- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 13:06:58

• 大姐好～我被你們慣壞了，嘿嘿～ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 13:46:15

• 頂！ -北京二號- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 13:43:49

• 二姐幹啥我幹啥，二姐寫詩我突然也想寫了，嗬嗬～ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 13:47:00

• HA, wonderful little piece, lovely -selfselfself- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 14:20:40

• 好漂亮的水仙花，好動人的英語詩。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/06/2010 postreply 08:34:33