用這個湊個數吧。

很拙, 以後有時間仔細精化一下。

look at sky whispering
"dear friend, how are you?"
your voice is resounding
"please return to OAK port"

think of the days we spent
sunny smile on my face
all the laughter and tears
form into a river winding

look westwards thinking
my heart's always with you
send my words, mr. wind
"back to me when you done"

:)

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• 親愛的， 我很喜歡你的詩歌， 這是你心的話語 -bearsback- ♂ (242 bytes) () 04/01/2010 postreply 18:03:01

• 你真的會寫。很美。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (90 bytes) () 04/01/2010 postreply 20:39:05

• sweetie -bearsback- ♂ (100 bytes) () 04/01/2010 postreply 21:00:17