you are a real poet

my words of love are carved in my heart
which dances with your every key stroke
from every single stroke love springs
and willingly i place myself under your yoke

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• 寫的好棒。讀著傷心。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (158 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 18:32:41

• 回複：寫的好棒。讀著傷心。 -bearsback- ♂ (58 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 19:21:38

• 你詩集不還沒出嗎？ -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (2 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 20:38:28

• 親愛的， 其實 -bearsback- ♂ (165 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 21:27:47

• 你在說我嗎？ -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (116 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 21:33:32

• Sweetie go to sleep -bearsback- ♂ (45 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 22:15:56

• bear，這個不錯。不知你的player是不是聽到。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (855 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 21:20:10

• sweetie, my cray-I has the right player. very beautiful music -bearsback- ♂ (40 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 21:31:34

• 音樂還湊合。尤其喜歡那畫和那首老掉牙的詩。。。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (22 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 21:38:10

• so sorry, sweetie -bearsback- ♂ (188 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 21:50:46

• the poem has only one line: -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (151 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 21:54:47

• ok, ok sweetie, thank you. I can see that line -bearsback- ♂ (39 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 22:07:39

• 你笨死了：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 22:09:08

• I forgot that I lately upgraded my cray-I browser -bearsback- ♂ (44 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 22:12:18

• 你的老爺機，真服氣了。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (40 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 21:57:52

• really? looks like I understand your music, ha -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 22:09:33

• 噢， -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (114 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 22:07:50

• your thinking of me moves me -bearsback- ♂ (19 bytes) () 03/25/2010 postreply 22:14:21