給hulahu

jumps a little fish brown
a seagull swoops down
a bear lulls in his calm
and grabs both with his palm

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• 這隻老熊夠聰明。然後呢？ -hulahu- ♀ (56 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 13:48:17

• 然後 -bearsback- ♂ (44 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 14:02:30

• 還是你厲害,機智靈活。今天不敢笑。小老板要走(layoff)。 -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 14:11:22

• sigh -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 14:37:27

• 估計hulahu還是不放過你，seagull的肉可比小魚多。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 14:18:58

• 需要再來一個stanza， 寫寫虎la虎，才能有下文表白。 -李唐- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 14:05:11

• later -bearsback- ♂ (145 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 14:35:45

• 好象虎辣虎不是那隻海鳥啊。你遇到難題了。。 -hulahu- ♀ (219 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 18:34:50

• what? -bearsback- ♂ (240 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 19:58:51

• 絕！實在是絕！不再給你出難題了， -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (64 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 20:23:27

• sweetie do take plenty of rest -bearsback- ♂ (10 bytes) () 02/17/2010 postreply 20:26:39