非常好!

這麽長的一篇文章讀得那麽流利很不容易。斷句和節奏都很好。

你不介意的話,我就雞蛋裏挑骨頭了.說得不對的地方,你多包涵。

BOOk is a little bit exaggerated. I think /u/ can be shorter.
SAY sounds like /se/, Webster is /sei/ but it is also ok /se/ in Southern

RUles somehow sounds like /roule/

ContrOl somewhat sounds like /k3ntru:l/ which I think it should be /k3ntroul/.

The stress of Otherwise is in the second syllable which I think it should be the first one.

Just my two cents.

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