coldness of winer (for 情人節活動)

use the smiles to conceal my crying heart
Your shoulder's not the haven i lean on
I intended to Wait for the next dawn
to see again with you the beautiful flowers
but forgot it's now in the snowy winter
no gardenias, no leaves, and no birds
only the coldness has frosted the windows
and put a lock on my overloading heart

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• 好，喜歡。 -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/23/2010 postreply 15:44:43

• 謝謝doitthen鼓勵。 -gardenia10- ♀ (39 bytes) () 01/23/2010 postreply 16:10:25

• 你怎麽不早說呢。 我在職場忙呢。下次在打架告訴我，我來教訓你老公 -doitthen- ♂ (611 bytes) () 01/23/2010 postreply 17:28:26

• "woman is on his big shoulder"--bird is on his back -ryu,- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/23/2010 postreply 17:35:44

• 我離得遠，沒見到bird。 -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 07:14:36

• Oh, a really cold winter--a beautiful and sad poem. -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/23/2010 postreply 16:16:25

• 好久不見，你的E文現在了不得，PF PF～～ -wxc369- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/23/2010 postreply 22:08:32

• 不知為什麽，我讀著讀著眼淚流出來了 -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 07:32:49

• LOVE, LOVE, TRUE LOVE. -葉紫荊- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 07:44:55

• 真的麽？ 我五十多了，真不知什麽是true love -doitthen- ♂ (116 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 08:47:04

• Age discrimination is no good. -葉紫荊- ♀ (627 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 10:06:54

• thank you. now i have been wiser -doitthen- ♂ (345 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 12:07:05

• note that the first line was a question i asked her -doitthen- ♂ (46 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 12:28:20

• 這詩寫的這麽好？文科出身的談戀愛是不是都這麽浪漫、轟烈啊？ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 12:58:02

• 理科出身的談戀愛是什麽樣的啊？ -葉紫荊- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 13:16:14

• 嗬嗬～像我這樣的 ^_^ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (14 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 13:38:36

• 哈哈，下輩子我當男的，求人把你介紹給我 ^_^ -葉紫荊- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 13:41:40

• 嫁給你這樣的人需要勇氣...不過... -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (138 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 13:45:53

• 你如果是個男的就好了，天空任你飛～世界任你翱翔～ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (88 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 13:49:34

• 小千姐姐你真可愛! -葉紫荊- ♀ (56 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 14:02:58

• 那是必須滴～女大三抱金磚，我是你姐嘛～～ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 14:12:44

• how about 女大五 ? -ryu,- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 14:18:34

• 鑽石磚吧。 -葉紫荊- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 15:20:00

• i have a question -doitthen- ♂ (123 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 17:38:51

• i've got an answer -葉紫荊- ♀ (105 bytes) () 01/25/2010 postreply 05:22:13

• 讓你極其痛苦的那個戀愛看來就是真愛了. -何德能- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 11:16:22

• 咳，沒痛苦過看來也是幸運的事兒呀～ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (122 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 13:41:21

• 我不是詩人。但的確不論是個人經曆或社會的現象對文學 -doitthen- ♂ (20 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 14:57:25

• 這位gardenia MM詩不錯啊，感覺有些麵熟？：） -振一- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 10:09:11

• Heard that gardenia is one of the hardest to grow plants. -葉紫荊- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 10:11:29

• good to know. Thanks for telling me. -振一- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 11:32:32

• 難道不是桅子花嗎？好象不難長，尤其是在美國的桅子花。 -veggiedoggie- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 13:43:54

• 我養過四盆，死了五盆。放棄了。 -葉紫荊- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 14:04:20

• 你的網名讓我想起了天澤園分享的英語歌曲《Gardenia in blossom》: -紫君- ♀ (283 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 12:03:52

• be my valentine, dardenia, open your heart;) -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:24:10

• 回複：be my valentine, gardenia, open your heart;) -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:31:21