其實我早就知道

A multiple choice
I circled D
glancing over
I saw your pen
land on E

in muffled voice
I asked for an erase
when it was passed
our hands touched
o, your face turned red
and my heart run fast

after the class
I wondered:
what parallelism was
you drew 2 lines
on a paper

for the next 20 years
I drawed 2 lines
that never meet
page after page
sheet after sheet

for the next 20 years
you hewed to your line
and I to mine

is this the life
you intend to live
or you plan a detour
to submit your soul
to love's lure?

I know
I have submitted mine

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• just,你真是才思敏捷，詩如泉湧. 真沒想到:一道題目＆一句玩笑， -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (77 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 20:49:49

• sweetie you are my poetry, you -bearsback- ♂ (36 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:06:29

• 謝謝你，改行當詩人算了。;0) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:08:48

• 這麽妙的詩，應該置頂!!!!! :) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 20:52:55

• 牛人,我今天見識了 -陶陶樂,樂陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 20:54:14

• 今天才見識啊。看來你missed了太多了。他的外好叫 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (28 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:01:28

• 有時候啊，還真想想醫生一樣，切開你的大腦看看， -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (72 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 20:58:03

• sweetie I -bearsback- ♂ (49 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:10:25

• haha, what a showoff. hats off to you, master! i got toleave. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:12:54

• oops the word submit was missing -bearsback- ♂ (77 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:04:35

• 這個我想了半天，最後猜出來了。ted=提交的過去時。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (33 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:11:34

• really? interesting. it was strange. -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:38:38

• let me try again -bearsback- ♂ (80 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:39:34

• oops -bearsback- ♂ (80 bytes) () 01/15/2010 postreply 21:40:32

• an eraser, drew -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/16/2010 postreply 16:06:15

• 很高興你出錯:):) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/16/2010 postreply 18:34:01

• 回複：很高興你出錯:):) -bearsback- ♂ (61 bytes) () 01/16/2010 postreply 19:05:43

• 回複：回複：很高興你出錯:):) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (340 bytes) () 01/16/2010 postreply 19:26:34

• 回複：回複：回複：很高興你出錯:):) -bearsback- ♂ (413 bytes) () 01/16/2010 postreply 19:43:02

• nice imagination:) let me try -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (84 bytes) () 01/16/2010 postreply 19:57:23

• haha 還有最大的錯 -bearsback- ♂ (22 bytes) () 01/16/2010 postreply 20:10:11

• 那是因為你當時愛上了布拉姬。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/16/2010 postreply 20:27:09