well written...

來源: 振一 於 2009-12-08 21:30:05 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (482 bytes)
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教主,俺不懂寫作,就從語法上吹毛求疵吧:
1. typo: wrtten->written
2. "similar to get a driving license": I thought "to" here is a prep., if so, it should be followed by a noun or a gerund instead of a verb.
3. "The rule of obtaining diving license": you listed multiple items, maybe it should be "rules" here?
4. "PADI requires you fill...": maybe "PADI requires you to fill.."?
5. "teachers were busy in handling": maybe "teachers were busy handling"?

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• Agree。謝謝振一的修改。 -任我為- ♂ 給 任我為 發送悄悄話 任我為 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/09/2009 postreply 02:44:55

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