it's beyond my capacity to 斧正
I believe in simplicity.
'new and hi-tech' can just be hi-tech
'enlarge and deepens' ->'deepens'
嘻嘻,斧正。。。
所有跟帖:
• 多謝斧正。 還可以大段地修改。段落架構如何?列舉的理由充分嗎? -我愛瑞士- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2009 postreply 23:31:24
• 謝謝,改得很好。希望就思路、論據也提意見 -我愛瑞士- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2009 postreply 00:42:33