Another netizen self3 read in a typical British accent. so I assume you are reading in general american accent. Since I have read once myself, I might have bias somehwere. Since you read after me, you definitely look for some kind of feedbacks from your reading. My feeling is that typical American [r] isn't properly pronounced, see awkward, startled, party. The word fast in American general accent should be pronounced its vowl as rhymed with "bat" ( I failed the last "fast" from my own reading on this one), your one is more a British version. Also, handsome's first vowl should be rhymed with bat. The last "girl" seem missing [r] sound. I hope my feedbacks are useful to you.
Overall. you read very fluently. The intonation is very good. I am also looking for some spooky feeling from your reading, which seem not there. (Look like I also failed adding spooky feeling into it, since I didn't scare people away).
pretty good
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Thanks. (my earlier reply might have been dropped by WXC)
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