I am so grateful for your re-drafting and correction. I should honestly admit that your version is indeeed much better than mine.
This is exactly what I hope and expect from you: inputs, comments,corrections, edition and so on.
It seens that I need to learn more and more deeply the grammar.
How about the second part of my article? Please continue to correct me.
感謝修改,的確增色很多,
所有跟帖:
• you might beg one of sisters here to correct the second half -checkingaround- ♂ (353 bytes) () 10/13/2009 postreply 15:02:25