Ok, let's talk business

Overall, you did good.
first of all, being a French speaker, you can do much better on linking.
Secondly, your pronunciation is a bit strained, you over did it somehow, relax your muscle a little. Let it flow like French.

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• 回複：Ok, let's talk business -李加陳- ♂ (53 bytes) () 10/12/2009 postreply 22:17:56

• vous avez fait un bon travail! -DirtyTalk- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2009 postreply 22:20:01