讀了本課近二十遍,仍自己發現幾個須改進的地方。希望各位在整體,細節,語音,語調,節奏等方麵看看,是否哪方麵還需要注意。先謝了。
I have read this for about twenty times, and this is the forth recording. I still catch severl places which need to be improved:
1. noble; there is a schwa sound added before the /l/sound, if the schwa sound is lighter, it would be better;
2. the /r/ sound in "farm" is not good;
3. "whenever" should be read lighter;
4. "who" should be read lighter.