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It is hard to detect pronounciation issue from your reading since I am so used to this style reading ( I can fully understand WaFangDian Super English School's youtube video without a script). But I am aware that you need to work on your phonetics with the real expert if you want to speak in general american accent. I went to YuGong's blog to listen the original recording on the same text, but I feel that accent is not the one I am learning now, so I will not try to read one here since it will cause lots of confusions.
Just a few simple ones for you to improve:
"Pumas are", you added an extra schwa between "s" and "are". "wild": please check online disctionary. "extraordinarily": your one is the same as the original recording, but it is outdated in America. "cat"'s vowl is not pronounced properly.