學二姐，每日一篇新概念 II冊第4課-8月24日作業

An exciting trip


I have just received a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is working for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different places in Australia. He has just bought an Australian car and has gone to Alice springs, a small town in the centre of Australia. He will soon visit Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. My brother has never been abroad before, so he is finding this trip very exciting.


請大家幫我進步。謝謝先！

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• 這個形式挺好啊 -風雲小豬- ♂ (190 bytes) () 08/24/2009 postreply 23:51:21

• 謝謝你，風雲小豬。雖然很少冒泡，但對你 -blueswan- ♀ (42 bytes) () 08/25/2009 postreply 22:18:44

• 不戴耳機，聽不出什麽大問題了。回家戴上耳機再聽。 -北京二號- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/25/2009 postreply 11:59:54

• One tip - 清輔音濁化 -lilac09- ♀ (131 bytes) () 08/25/2009 postreply 13:59:58

• 謝謝。我應該注意這一點。 -blueswan- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/25/2009 postreply 22:19:24

• 回複：學二姐，每日一篇新概念 II冊第4課-8月24日作業 -eyeyey- ♀ (244 bytes) () 08/25/2009 postreply 15:20:59

• 謝謝你的這些建議。 -blueswan- ♀ (126 bytes) () 08/25/2009 postreply 22:21:24

• 前麵各位的意見很好，我再補充一點： -北京二號- ♀ (160 bytes) () 08/25/2009 postreply 21:05:18

• 謝謝二姐的鼓勵。你可是我的榜樣。 -blueswan- ♀ (201 bytes) () 08/25/2009 postreply 22:24:14