女兒的小說 - 丟失的兔子

本帖於 2009-07-25 17:05:09 時間, 由版主 林貝卡 編輯

女兒霏霏愛看有關動物的小說,她屬兔,小兔子是她最喜歡的動物。去年她7歲生日,好友Jani送給她一隻雪白的小兔,我們為她取名為“雪花”(Snow Flake)。在有雪花之前的那個聖誕節寒假,她寫了小說“The Lost Rabbit”(丟失的兔子),配上電腦圖畫,被"Creation by You"出版社收入,算是霏霏發表的第一篇小說。今天抽空將她的英文小說收入我的博客。 

    小兔“雪花”

 The Lost Rabbit

I had Rachel the rabbit for a long time. She was a light brown rabbit. She loved water and carrots. She liked to hear me play the piano. She lived in our living room cage. Rachel liked to look at our two goldfish, Joey and Tiny, in our fish tank.

Rachel and I loved to play hide-and-seek and tag. We would hide behind trees and bushes in hide-and-seek. In tag we would run away from each other. When we had breaks, I would pet her. She liked to eat grass when I petted her.

My little brother liked Rachel. He helped to clean the cage. He would put everything in a zip lock bag, and then he threw the bag to the trash can. He did a good job for Rachel.

My Mom gave Rachel fresh water and food every day. Mom and I gave her a bath sometimes, but Rachel did not like her bath. We would dry her after her bath. She liked to hop around the ball after the bath.

Dad and I took Rachel for vet's check-up. When Rachel did not look good, we would take her to see the vet. Sometimes the vet would give her a shot. Rachel did not like the shot. The vet said that Rachel would get better and she did get better afterwards.

One Fall day, Rachel and I played a game of tag on the backyard. When I was about to tag her, she ran out of the fence and got lost. I looked all around but could not find her. Then I started to cry and I cried for a long time.

My dad and mom comforted me. My brother hugged me. I started to feel better. I stopped crying, but I still felt sad.

My parents and I went to a lot of pet stores trying to find a similar looking rabbit, but none of them looked like Rachel. All of the rabbits did not have a lot of fur in the winter. I missed Rachel my lost rabbit. 

That winter we had a lot of snow. We made a snow rabbit on the backyard. We also made an igloo and a snow fort for the rabbit. I liked the snow rabbit a lot and we all had a nice time playing in the snow. 

Spring came, my snow rabbit melted. I started to pray for a real rabbit. We went to a new pet store in town. I saw one rabbit that looked exactly like Rachel. She had the same fluffy light brown fur. She seemed to recognize me and she waved at me.

We asked the store owner where the rabbit was from. He told us that she was found in Quail Valley last Fall. "Quail Valley" I said in surprise, "This is where we live and we lost our rabbit last Fall." The owner was very kind and he gave us back our rabbit Rachel.

We were so happy to bring Rachel back home. We gave her food and water. My brother cleaned the cage. Rachel was happy to bounce around us. She watched our two goldfish swim in the tank. I petted her and played with her. Most of all, I was thankful that my prayers were answered. 

-----------------------

written in December 2006 (寫於2006年12月)
published in January 2007(發表於2007年1月)



請閱讀更多我的博客文章>>>
  • 你怎麽看自己(轉)
  • 為什麽我不是無神論者 6:完結篇
  • 為什麽我不是無神論者 5:雪大第一年(下)
  • 為什麽我不是無神論者 4:雪大第一年(上)
  • 為什麽我不是無神論者 3:武夷篇
  • 所有跟帖: 

    thanks, nice article! i like it. 雪花 is so cute! -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/26/2009 postreply 15:56:20

    你的女兒霏霏真有才,英語小說寫得生動,情節起伏,充滿了生活的氣息。 -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (310 bytes) () 07/26/2009 postreply 20:27:27

    請問你們如何跟出版社聯係出版的?謝謝! -zhizuchangle- 給 zhizuchangle 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/28/2009 postreply 13:06:42

    請您先登陸,再發跟帖!