This is my more than two hours' practice result -

oops, it seems that this is my best and there is no further improvement for continuing, at least for today.
Post it here for fellowers to criticize.

Pick a Peak

People who pick peaks weekly seem to need to appear deep in order to be distinguished from mere pea pickers. Peter, a champion peak picker, thought he'd be even neater if he were the deepest peak picker in Peoria, Phoenix, and New Zealand. On his peak peak picking week, though, Peter, a peak picker's peak picker, realized that he was not deep. This is not easy for a peak picker to admit and it pitched Peter into a pit of peak picking despair. He was pitiful for six weeks and then lifted himself to hitherto unrevealed personal peaks.

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• correction: for fellow readers to criticize- -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2009 postreply 11:08:34

• Very nice reading with strong VOA tone. Thx for sharing. -北京二號- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2009 postreply 11:19:19

• Thanks you! your reading is really good -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2009 postreply 11:27:19