more comments and some supplement to lovchina's

天澤園, Good reading, and keep up with it.
It needs time to build up one's muscles, you might not realize your progress, however, once you've noticed the porgress, you've advanced a lot already.

One point I want to share is on back-mouth sounding. I feel that the starting point of the sound and the vibration of vocal fold are the key. For example, when we pronounce the voiceless consonant /p/ and voiced consonant /b/, we might purposefully feel/let the sound initiating from the vocal cord area, and feel the vocal fold vibrating (at least slightly), esp. for the voiced /b/. Such practice would speedy our back mouth sounding, and make our pronunciation more native.

Specific comments on your reading:
Some are one time error and you might recover in the next reading, some might be negligence of the skill and needs to be point out, anyhow, I just list them all (my first catch in the reading):

infinite -> the first syllable needs accent; you emphasized the middle syllable;
crosses -> the suffix 'es' needs to be read out /-siz/;
wing -> emphasize the sound of -ing; distinguish 'wing' from 'win'
albatross -> the 'l' sound should be sounded out; you pronounced the starting 'l' good, but not the 'l' sound behind a vowel;
yield -> same as above, and pronounce it as two syllables would help;
nearer -> the /-rer/ sound needs to be out;
tire -> treat the word as two syllable pronunciation
pick -> this word has a lax vowel /i/ (short vowel), not a long vowel /i:/
measure -> note the sound of the second syllable

Happy studies
billnet

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• 也受益匪淺，謝謝！哪天也上傳一段audio,請指正。 -好學又好問- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/11/2009 postreply 19:14:59

• Welcome, Looking forward to reading your post & audio! -天澤園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/11/2009 postreply 19:30:21

• Thanks a lot, I appreciate it ! -天澤園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/11/2009 postreply 19:24:10