Drunk on a summer night Happy V day

Drunk on a summer night

You open a bottle of tawny port
when I gaze at the ebbing tides
Inch by inch nightgown covers the fort
Sip by sip we slip into moonlight
My hands too shaky to pour you a drink
but my feet still wobble towards you
Into you my world is to shrink
a world in my arms wavy and true

My head swirls for a pillow
and finds your laps that are mellow
I feel floating in the sleeping sea
a sea of candles surrounding me 
Your fingers comb my hairs
and mesmerizes me like a lullaby
Your breath sweetens the air
and immerses me into a cherry pie

I'm drunk on a summer night
half on the Port wine
half on the candle light
that's flickering in your eyes and mine

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• Very romantic! A great poem for V-day ~ ~ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 13:15:16

• Especially these lines--I'm drunk on a summer night -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 16:29:21

• half on the Port wine, half on the candle light -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 16:29:55

• that's flickering in your eyes and mine... -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 16:30:15

• Sure up I had a candle lit dinner on v-day -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 21:20:33

• 顫音兄的英文詩，流暢自如，隨手拈來。大寫的服。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 16:36:40

• Thx yingying, so flattered -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 21:19:24

• 好詩, 要不要現在就喝起來～ -moonlight7- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 19:37:58

• Yep, port is sweet -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 21:18:50

• Passionate and sensual. Very well written. -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 20:12:14

• Thx -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2024 postreply 21:18:23