"深沉最是浮華夢,未醒誰人不勝仙?兩岸蘆花弄晚煙,幾家漁火幾家眠?" 兩首七絕通過首尾的兩個問句彼此呼應,妙不可言!
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• "unbroken broken, woven unwoven", 同樣妙不可言! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 21:04:24
• Very creative verse with nice rhyme! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 21:05:37
• 謝謝藍靈和秋蘭分享,周末愉快! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 21:06:14
• 小西周末愉快! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:03:20
• 感謝小西,大家周末快樂! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:31:11
• It's her preference. I think it works for her. Right, 藍靈? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:33:28
• 對呀,紉秋蘭!I like it short, poetry-wise. Of course, it leaves -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:52:29
• much to be desired. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:52:59
• You're a perfectionist, setting the bar high for yourself. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 23:06:39
• Guilty as charged, like you said. Haha! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 23:16:40
• Cute. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 23:21:27
• Thanks! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/03/2024 postreply 09:06:49
• 感謝小西鼓勵!I don't think I'm really up to the writing job. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:02:30
• Hi, 藍靈! Let me eat that humble pie. I earned it. Haha! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:06:23
• Hi, renqiulan! Let's not have a food fight here. I own the -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:10:12
• humble pie. It's mine and mine alone. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:11:41
• No way. You have an apple pie. I'm eating (the) humble pie. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:16:12
• Enjoy it then. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:20:00
• You bet. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:21:30
• 小西好!感謝一再鼓勵。中國古典格律詩很具魅力,沒法擋的。我是效顰,不過也有少許得著哩。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:29:57
• 作為讀者的我,也有得著。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 22:57:18
• 太感謝了。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 23:04:12
• 不用客氣。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/02/2024 postreply 23:17:17
• 讀書樂,賞詩樂。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/03/2024 postreply 09:06:18