美壇活動【Poem Reading Tuesday】My Doggy Ate My Essay by Darren Sardel

My Doggy Ate My Essay
by Darren Sardelli

My doggy ate my essay.
He picked up all my mail.
He cleaned my dirty closet
and dusted with his tail.
 
He straightened out my posters
and swept my wooden floor.
My parents almost fainted
when he fixed my bedroom door.
 
I did not try to stop him.
He made my windows shine.
My room looked like a palace,
and my dresser smelled like pine.
 
He fluffed up every pillow.
He folded all my clothes.
He even cleaned my fish tank
with a toothbrush and a hose.
 
I thought it was amazing
to see him use a broom.
I'm glad he ate my essay
on “How to Clean My Room.”

Source: Galaxy Pizza and Meteor Pie (Laugh-A-Lot Books, 2009)

About the author
Darren Sardelli | Poetry Foundation

 

 

【活動說明】
欣賞了詩歌之後，歡迎大家在跟帖裏對詩歌進行點評，分享讀後感。本活動主要是為大家提供一個閱讀英文詩歌的窗口，以賞詩為主，不要求寫詩。如果大家偶爾靈感閃現，有感而發地想要寫寫詩的話，大家可以嚐試用相同的或者相關的詩歌標題，寫出不一樣的英文詩，在賞詩寫詩的過程中自娛自樂。寫出來的英文詩如果願意分享的話，歡迎以主帖或者跟帖的方式分享。謝謝大家的關注和支持！

Let's get some learning from the fun and get some fun from the learning!

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所有跟帖： 

• Happy Tuesday, everyone! Let's have fun! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:05:46

• 歡迎大家在跟帖裏對詩歌進行點評，分享讀後感。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:06:49

• a clever kid blames his dog for not finishing his essay? ;) -最西邊的島上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:21:46

• 西島好！Read it again and see if you can figure it out :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:50:17

• I trust my feeling, so that is my thinking (for now) ;-) -最西邊的島上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:51:56

• If you got it, it should make you laugh, did you? Hahaha. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:53:10

• of course, and I wish my cat can clean our rooms too. -最西邊的島上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:55:29

• even when there is no"how to' essay for him to eat. hahaha -最西邊的島上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:56:07

• Hahaha, you got it! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:58:46

• The doggy ate the essay“How to Clean My Room”, -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:00:00

• then the doggy did all the housework for the author! Hahaha! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:01:38

• thus the kid couldn't hand in the essay as it was eaten;) -最西邊的島上- ♀ (272 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 15:04:39

• Hahaha, I know you're kidding :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 21:05:20

• The author just wants to make readers laugh. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 21:07:37

• He doesn't care about the essay or the teacher :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 21:09:33

• lovely doggy~~ -moonlight7- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 07:59:36

• I wish I have a dog like this one! 哈哈哈！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:05:26

• how about your essay ? ~~ -moonlight7- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:08:37

• That’s a good question.haha. -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:49:59

• 哈哈，I don't have an essay, but I just posted a little poem :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:00:30

• Check it out! Thanks. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:01:24

• Happy poetry day, 小西！Human's best friend must be amused. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:32:03

• Homework is now a treat for dogs. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:35:23

• I remember a grade one teacher once said, "Garbage in. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:39:57

• Garbage out. So don't feed your dog with lazy bones." -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:44:15

• Good point! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 11:37:22

• Yes, it's a K-9 way to put it. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 19:46:43

• Happy poetry day, 秋蘭！Yes, I'm so sure! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:06:51

• Darren Sardelli is a humorous poet who knows how to get kids -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (801 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 08:39:25

• I'm glad you like it! 謝謝盈盈的鼓勵和支持！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:05:16

• My pleasure.：）） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:47:00

• So the dog became a scholar then, "u r what u eat" is real!! -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:02:49

• Hahaha, you should let your cat do the same! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:08:52

• Love his style. Sounds a lot like Dr. Seuss. -7grizzly- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:08:32

• They both are writers for children :) 謝謝點評鼓勵。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 09:11:40

• a whimsical poem, a good read for children -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 10:48:41

• Since it makes people laugh, it's good for everyone :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 11:26:17

• 謝謝顫音點評鼓勵。Happy Tuesday! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 11:27:20

• What a fun poem! It inspired me to write sth. See inside -godog- ♂ (576 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 11:37:27

• Hahaha, so funny, clever write! 謝謝go兄分享。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 11:44:52

• 哈哈哈，poor doggie，just because he couldn't talk！：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 18:28:26

• It is an AI dog:)) -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 14:54:13

• Hahaha, 很好的聯想！The poem was published in 2009, no AI yet :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 20:58:14

• A nice pick again! It's a fun piece. :) 跟一個：） -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (390 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 15:09:42

• 哈哈哈，調皮的蟲蟲！I highly recommend iRobot！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 18:27:16

• Hahaha, funny memory and great share! 謝謝蟲蟲分享。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 21:00:39

• Nice pick! Thanks for the introduction! Perfect rhyming! -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 18:19:26

• Thank you, 靈靈！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2024 postreply 21:01:30