《鷓鴣天》神州夢

（詞林正韻第二部平聲）

一聚蘭亭兩晉郎：左思研墨右軍旁。*
毫端點出雲端彩，身外飛來世外香。
龍影舞，鳳眉揚，風騷何處不炎黃？
春雷交響英雄曲，古國新民理舊疆。

* 左思，西晉文豪；右軍，東晉書聖。

Yán Huáng, personifying Chinese ancestry, may look and sound distant in the past but, in fact, can't be closer to the heart of every Chinese who cares to be forward-looking.

Standing on the broad shoulders of Yán Huáng, today's Chinese have the dawning horizon rising before them.

With vision, a golden age is in sight.

作者：紉秋蘭

 

 

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• 一聚蘭亭兩晉郎：左思研墨右軍旁。七律多用典故。這裏的典故用得漂亮！晚上好，秋蘭。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:10:10

• 謝謝，盈盈晚上好！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:20:02

• 炎黃can't be closer to the heart of every Chinese -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:28:21

• Yan Huang, in my opinion, is the bedrock of Chinese as -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:34:58

• a people and China as a nation. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:35:47

• 憧憬曉明，樂觀來日。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:17:41

• 謝謝，藍靈好！過去的改變不了，未來的有待塑造。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:22:15

• "with vision, a golden age is in sight. " I like it. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:27:41

• Do you believe it? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:29:04

• In the future, I believe. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:41:46

• The present? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:50:13

• In the present, I see Arcus clouds. How can I -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:55:35

• believe in Arcus clouds? -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:55:58

• No, you don't believe in rolling storm clouds. I get that. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:07:37

• I believe that we are having the storm before the calm. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:09:50

• So you are an incurable optimist. I get that. Good night! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:16:05

• I can't be more proud of being an incurable optimist. Hahaha -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:27:03

• Goodnight, 藍靈! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:28:09

• 問好藍靈。好像在星空見過你。當時幫我回帖的是你嗎？：） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:30:03

• 盈盈好！是嗎？ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:39:31

• 有點印象，希望我沒記錯。再次歡迎來美壇玩。：） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:42:09

• 沒關係。感謝盈盈，給美壇帶來活力。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:48:34

• 左思研墨右軍旁，秋蘭妙筆左右逢源 ：） “毫端點出雲端彩，身外飛來世外香”，兩端兩外世人讚！秋蘭好詩，謝謝分享！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 09:17:47

• 秋蘭妙用典故，大讚！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 09:41:39

• 用典，於我是一種得著，尤其是在用得其所的時候。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 20:28:25

• 謝謝小西！自問實在習作水平，邊寫邊學而已。情懷倒是足以自珍的。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 20:26:25

• 秋蘭太謙虛了。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 20:42:01

• Nice poem,full of positivity. -godog- ♂ (82 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 17:09:10

• Thank you, godog! Yes, call it sunny side up. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 20:31:00