《Hot Sun, Burn Me into Ashes Please》《烈日，請把我燒成灰燼》

《Hot Sun, Burn Me into Ashes Please》

Hot sun, burn me into ashes please
Ashes with free spirits
going up
up
up
Riding with the white clouds in the blue sky
Above the world

Author notes: 
The lines came to my mind when I walked alone in the soccer field near my home. The hot sun, white clouds, and blue sky seemed so surreal to me, and I felt that I would love to join them.

A comment from Allpoetry:
kaye - A great vision of thought. The feeling to this is a signature of art in letting your craft guide the ink.
Congratulations on fpp.

《烈日，請把我燒成灰燼》
烈日，請把我燒成灰燼
富含自由精神的灰燼
直上雲霄
與藍天裏的白雲同行
遊離於這個世界之上

P. S.  這首詩的英文版 "Hot Sun, Burn Me into Ashes Please" 於2023年10月3日被選上了Allpoetry的首頁(Front Page Picks, FPP).

 

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• 沙發。哇，被選上了英文詩歌網站Allpoetry的首頁！Awesome ! -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 20:35:06

• 謝謝盈盈的鼓勵。看來，燒成灰之後更容易引起注意 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 20:49:26

• 哈哈，小西幽默。有文字功底的灰，才會引注意呀。否則也是白燒了。LOL -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 20:52:44

• 哈哈哈，其實很簡單。隻需要在烈日下，在光天化日之下，光明正大地燒成灰就不會白燒 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 21:06:09

• Ashes with free spirits，富含自由精神的灰燼 直上雲霄，喜歡這一句。欣賞，學習！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 20:43:55

• 我也很喜歡這一句 ：）這句和末句（Above the world）是這首詩的核心，也就是我們所說的“詩魂”。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 20:54:25

• 詩歌短小精悍，耐人尋味。謝謝詩人分享。晚安小西，晚安美壇 ~ ~· -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 20:57:11

• 謝謝盈盈的點評，盈盈辛苦了，晚安 ~ ~ ~ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 21:01:04

• Above the world! What a free spirit! -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 20:43:55

• WOW, you got the soul of this poem! 謝謝方君入木三分的點評。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 20:58:02

• free ashes！ 讚！ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 21:47:55

• 謝顫音。剛才看見了你的Blue Ashes，想起了這首詩。去年在書壇發過，當時隻有英文版，後來在我的博客裏加上了中文版。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2023 postreply 21:54:07

• 富有想象力，小西是文科僧？ 要是我頂多想象到 bake me 2 jerky -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 05:30:12

• 噗～ 你們商學院怎麽算？一半文科，一半理科嗎？：） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:01:24

• 哈哈哈，移哥過獎了，也誤判了。我是理科生，不過，從小學到高中我都是班上的語文課代表 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:15:16

• Poetry is where imagination takes off and flies---like ash. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 05:57:54

• 秋蘭好，You're a poet better than most of poets :) - CBA7 - -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 05:59:59

• ∞...an infinitive NAW! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:06:37

• Hi, 盈盈! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:08:23

• Morning 秋蘭 ～～ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:10:30

• 謙虛使人發月半。這句能看懂嗎？哈哈 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:09:47

• Don't worry. Humble pies keep me fit. Haha! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:18:49

• 你怎麽啥都懂？真可怕！哈哈。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:25:34

• 哈哈哈，謙虛使人發胖，秋蘭可要小心啊！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:19:37

• 哈哈哈 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:25:49

• Perhaps, poetry is ash, and vice versa. Hi, 小西! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:01:07

• Irish people talk about ash trees with relish,but I digress. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:14:01

• Hi, 秋蘭！Thank you sharing your poetic thoughts, -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:26:35

• like fresh air in the morning. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 06:27:00

• super！ -Oona- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 10:02:32

• Thank you, Oona! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 10:49:20

• Few words but saying a lot. Really liked it! -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2023 postreply 11:23:25

• Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/06/2023 postreply 09:29:46

• 小西好詩啊！首先是想象力，想象自己被太陽燒成灰燼，自由升空，俯瞰芸芸眾生，其次語言精煉，格式自由，一氣嗬成，非常讚！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2023 postreply 07:51:25

• 謝謝冬夏的點評和鼓勵。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2023 postreply 20:41:10

• Please don't, not when I'm alive :-) -7grizzly- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2023 postreply 11:23:13

• Hahaha, OK, I promise :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2023 postreply 20:43:16