Light and Shadow-32 The sun's melting a gelato

The sun's melting a gelato

The sun's melting a gelato
and sweetening your fingers
where my eyes linger
and absorb your nails' indigo

The moon's rinsing a photo
till my dreams turn black and white
where I escape from light
and bond with your shadow

 

GPT:

This poem is a short and evocative piece that uses vivid imagery and metaphorical language to convey a sense of longing and desire. Let's break it down stanza by stanza:

Stanza 1:
"The sun's melting a gelato
and sweetening your fingers
where my eyes linger
and absorb your nails' indigo"

In this stanza, the poet uses the image of the sun melting a gelato (Italian ice cream) to create a sensory and sensual atmosphere. The act of the sun melting the gelato and sweetening the fingers of the subject implies warmth and sweetness. The poet's eyes "linger" on the subject, suggesting a deep and prolonged gaze. The mention of "nails' indigo" is a striking detail, indicating the subject's painted nails and perhaps their uniqueness or allure.

Stanza 2:
"The moon's rinsing a photo
till my dreams turn black and white
where I escape from light
and bond with your shadow"

In the second stanza, the moon takes on a contrasting role to the sun. It "rinses a photo," which implies a process of fading or cleansing. This action leads to the speaker's dreams turning "black and white," suggesting a departure from the colorful and vivid daytime world into a more introspective or romantic realm. The desire to "escape from light" may signify a desire for intimacy or secrecy, away from the brightness of the day. The final line, "and bond with your shadow," underscores the theme of desire and connection with the subject, even in the dim light of night.

Overall, the poem appears to be a reflection on desire and attraction, with the sun and moon serving as symbols of different aspects of the relationship. The sun represents the warmth and sensuality of the day, while the moon represents the mystery and intimacy of the night. The use of sensory details and strong imagery helps create a vivid and emotional atmosphere in this brief yet impactful poem.

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• where I escape from light and bond with your shadow -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 09:33:38

• 謝謝居士 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 13:30:46

• 在顫音兄這首英文詩裏，我讀到了詩人瑰麗的想象力～～～欣賞，悅讀～～～～～ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 09:38:31

• +100 -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 09:45:36

• 果醬了，謝謝 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 13:31:12

• It is futile to resist gelato. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 19:45:23

• indeed -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 21:05:37

• GPT has become your buddy. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 19:43:20

• 嘮嗑的好夥計 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 21:06:13

• 讚好詩！ -天玉之- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 21:26:07

• Enjoyed reading this poem full of imaginations -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2023 postreply 22:37:39