《The Peach Blossom Written in My Poetry》《寫在詩裏的桃花》

The Peach Blossom Written in My Poetry

if there is only one peach blossom in spring
you are the second one
I see it in my eyes

if there are only two peach blossoms in spring
you are the third one
I hold it in my hand

if there are only three peach blossoms in spring
you are the fourth one
I wear it on my head

if there are only four peach blossoms in spring
you are the fifth one
I hold it in my mouth

if there are only five peach blossoms in spring
you are the sixth one
I hide it in my heart

if there are only six peach blossoms in spring
you are the seventh one
I write it in my poetry

if there are no peach blossoms in spring
I still have my peach blossom
spring doesn't have to have peach blossoms

Comments from Allpoetry:
pandorapoet22 - How refreshingly beautiful and endearing it is to read such a warmhearted and innocent poem. Very well done and thank you so much for sharing this gorgeous gem. May your peach blossoms be many, my friend and may you carry them deep within your heart in whatever you do and wherever you may go.

Garbage bin - I really like the way this piece progresses through each tercet. Each stanza bringing a stronger sense of adoration. Inspired

寫在詩裏的桃花

假如春天隻有一朵桃花
你就是第二朵
看在眼裏

假如春天隻有兩朵桃花
你就是第三朵
捧在手裏

假如春天隻有三朵桃花
你就是第四朵
戴在頭上

假如春天隻有四朵桃花
你就是第五朵
含在口裏

假如春天隻有五朵桃花
你就是第六朵
藏在心裏

假如春天隻有六朵桃花
你就是第七朵
寫在詩裏

假如春天沒有桃花
我還是有桃花
春天不必有桃花

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所有跟帖： 

• Nice poem smells fragrant like peach blossoms！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 08:57:49

• Thank you for your lovely comment. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 09:07:53

• 前些天討論過關於eye的複數問題： -妖妖靈- ♀ (239 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 09:10:41

• What's your point? 有兩首歌的歌名裏都是用的 eyes, not eye，見裏麵的鏈接： -CBA7- ♀ (484 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 09:26:24

• 就是想知道eyes到底用不用複數？看來在成語裏不用，一般說話時用吧 -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 09:31:26

• a picture's worth a thousand words, how about two? -移花接木- ♂ (222 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 09:37:39

• Then, poets are no longer needed? 哈哈哈，和移哥開個玩笑。有時候，文字的魅力無法替代。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 09:43:14

• 謝謝移哥分享美圖！有美圖裏麵的美人，春天不必有桃花 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 09:59:20

• Cheery verses brighten the day. Thanks for sharing. -7grizzly- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 10:29:04

• Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 10:45:57

• 我這首詩是借桃花寫女人，是從男人的角度寫給女人的，是一種愛的表達，對桃花的愛層層遞進，寫在詩裏的桃花是最愛的。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 10:49:48

• 桃花在中國文化裏有情的含義對嗎？ -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 11:41:46

• 對於中國文化，移哥應該比我精通得多啊。“桃花潭水深千尺，不及汪倫送我情”，汪倫道：“桃花者，潭水名也，並無桃花“。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2023 postreply 19:05:23