試譯網友詩 - 《晨曉》原作：夢遊桃源

Dawning

 

The dawn is beaming 

Over that deep blue

Winter’s melting with that touch of spring

As that rainbow coats all creations below

Her tenderness caressing

A chime under that rim

Sweet and mellow the jingle

Echoes about to one and all

Waking the travelers

To get on where they long to go

 

The indolent souls

In a hazy world

Singing an Auld Lang Syne

To that cauldron of old

To savor for a lifetime

To forget not

The souls come alive

To the east rises the sun

All is here and all is as good

所有跟帖： 

• 感覺在聽美若黎明，又像在聽往日時光，又醇又香的詩，餘味悠長的翻譯～ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/26/2023 postreply 20:13:33

• 謝謝欣賞和鼓勵！ -小溪之水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/27/2023 postreply 04:05:15

• 感覺這麽美應該發懶。 -jianchi9090- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/28/2023 postreply 07:26:57

• 謝謝小溪之水師友有雅興，將拙作譯成英文。很遺憾，我的英文十分蹩腳，無法領略你譯文的風采。祝好！ -夢遊桃源- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/28/2023 postreply 14:59:24

• 謝謝夢兄寄送的靈感！一直很喜歡你寫的詩。 -小溪之水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/28/2023 postreply 16:56:20