填詞試與莎士比亞唱和

Sonnet 47 by William Shakespeare 

 

Betwixt mine eye and heart a league is took,

And each doth good turns now unto the other:

When that mine eye is famish'd for a look,

Or heart in love with sighs himself doth smother,

With my love's picture then my eye doth feast,

And to the painted banquet bids my heart;

Another time mine eye is my heart's guest,

And in his thoughts of love doth share a part:

So, either by thy picture or my love,

Thy self away, art present still with me;

For thou not farther than my thoughts canst move,

And I am still with them, and they with thee;

   Or, if they sleep, thy picture in my sight

   Awakes my heart, to heart's and eyes' delight.

 

 

《江城子》

 

古今交界燕來聲

遠嚶鳴

近叮嚀

絕唱驚塵

出世一詩靈

與我同飛何處去

修竹外

繞蘭亭

 

流觴曲水說浮生

失崢嶸

得娉婷

眼底江山

心底祝升平

萬代炎黃圓一夢

星雨夜

月鄉晴

 

……

 

詞林正韻第十一部平聲

 

紉秋蘭原創

 

所有跟帖： 

• 押韻漂亮，意境漂亮 -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 14:24:29

• 謝謝靈版主！希望在意境上，可與莎翁作個中西唱和。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 14:56:21

• 謝謝花帥（跟版主說的）點讚！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 14:58:38

• 我除了讀意境還八卦地數行數，會不會你也會去match莎翁的行數，哈！江城子不是14行是16行 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 15:04:47

• 花帥是音樂人吧。十四行詩，跟《江城子》雙調，雖不匹對，但是在節奏方麵，相呼相應，也未可知。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 15:14:00

• 恭喜renqiulan。首頁進來，謝謝網管，填詞試與莎士比亞唱和 推薦成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 15:52:54

• 謝謝大家！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 16:08:41

• 傳說中的14行詩，得見真人，厲害了。 江城子有功力。牛人。 -jianchi9090- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/06/2023 postreply 15:28:26