Hello, the world!

“Hello, the world!” was

our first BASIC program

You would not see it until you execute

 

The world is

             neither a void space that we claim and fill

             nor an infinite time that runs forever

                                                     and guarantees a future

 

It is not a habitat

             unless we take care

It is not a shelter

             unless we care

 

It is not a boulder

that is irremovable and undeformable

A boulder can be moved and shaped

A mountain can sharply bend the waterway, yet

water can erode the mountain over time

                          making its own way

 

The world is

neither an object we handle

nor a subject we can dodge

It is

what we do and don't

what we are for and against

what we keep and alter

what we create and destroy

Really, it is

what we made it to be

 

20230101

所有跟帖： 

• Hello，新朋友！最後一段的反義詞排比寫得真好 ！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 18:09:29

• 謝謝鼓勵！ -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 18:13:29

• 2023新年第一天來美壇，是個好兆頭！英文這麽好，多來美壇一起邊放鬆邊玩英語邊進步！：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 18:40:00

• 過獎。我很少寫詩，寫英文詩更少。你們湊合著看。哈哈 -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 18:44:07

• 來美壇不一定需要寫英文詩，隻要和英文有關，什麽文體都可以：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 18:54:50

• 謝謝介紹。來了就不走了，哈哈 -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 19:04:40

• 你們這裏以前的英語作業很有意思，我看。 -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 19:05:39

• 是嗎？你覺得哪個有意思？美壇需要新鮮Idea，新鮮血液，帶動大家玩起來：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 19:11:54

• 慣用語有意思。玩學結合。翻譯當然是藝無止境。 -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 19:25:18

• 能把英文玩得像中文一樣自如就是最高境界了～ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 19:53:57

• 都不容易，現在兩岸三地漢語寫得好的人並不多，一般美國人的寫作水平很低。 -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 20:40:05

• Hello, 新朋友：）新年好！用多種計算機語言寫過“hello, world! “:) 這首詩，更喜歡前麵的兩段 -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 21:32:02

• 謝謝鼓勵，新年好！ -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 22:03:29

• 恭喜馮墟。首頁進來，謝謝網管，Hello, the world!推薦成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (95 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 15:09:03

• 謝謝梅班長，新年好！英文詩文在文學城受“歧視”，多虧了你們幾位版主。 -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 15:15:17

• The 是畫蛇添足 -手中有股心中無股- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 19:31:43

• 謝謝指教。沒有冠詞不好吧? -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 19:37:38

• 在這個語境中，不需要定冠詞：）Hello, world! -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 22:10:34

• 我要表達的是Hello, the world. The world of our making. 程序員寫的的確是 -馮墟- ♂ (552 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 07:41:17

• 我試著解釋一下。 -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (294 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 08:30:56

• There is a song titled "Hello, the world!". Another titled -馮墟- ♂ (60 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 08:54:42