Sometimes I like the New Yorker (magazine) more than

the New Yorkers (people). I am not sure the metaphor ("wearing a dream upon your hair") works here. I think it will take time to put words together in a more readable way. This is my suggestion: Make a list of key words you will use in your piece. Then google them one by one and see how native speakers put them in their sentences. 

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• Thanks for your sincere suggestions！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/19/2022 postreply 19:49:15

• 我以前寫過“把夢想別在發梢”，指夢想“輕快飛揚”的意思。看到你上次 -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/19/2022 postreply 19:55:25

• 用把秋天別在衣袖上。我就故意模仿了。我以前是用的“embed on”，這裏用wearing -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/19/2022 postreply 19:56:47